training for rider

[murtagh]

marugie was standing at the gates of ur'baen he had nothing to do with his life so he became a swordsman for three years he trained and became a wold class swordsman. he neve even had anyone hwo cared about him so he traine for those three gruling years he started to remeber them.
three years ago:
chales his mentor was shouting "flick to the left not the right" "ok then i will" he knoked his mentors gray sword out of his hand "any better?"he asked "better but it needs practice" his mentor replied "good lets train some more" said marugie
two years later:
charles was using a real sword aginst marige now he paried and blocked every moe now "i know your not trying" said charles so he slashed his sword faster than any human ever had before and almost as fast as an elve for he wasonly half human( and he was the son of brom but older than eragon).he fliped over charles with inhuman agility. charles spun around swifly but not fast enough he hit charleses sword knokced it in the air then caught it with his left hand the impact was so hard it knocked charles back in to the gilead capital "session done" said charles
presant:
marige walked to the gates of uru'baen his sword flashed as he walkedon and in he wen into the castle.